Songweaver

[Marr965]

Characteristics	Constitution, Dexterity, Fellowship
Skills	Acrobatics, Common Lore, Disguise, Performer, Politics, Scrutiny, Stealth
Completion Bonus	Devastating Dance and Strengthening Song can affect targets 5 metres further away.

Level	Title	Prerequisites	Feats
1	Two Left Feet	Dexterity 2 Fellowship 2 Performer 2	Devastating Dance Decadence Luck Speak Language (Any other than Syrneth) Strengthening Song *Skill Focus (Performer)
2	Coryphee	Dexterity OR Fellowship 3 Dexterity OR Fellowship 2 Performer 2 Devastating Dance Strengthening Song	Devastating Dance Evasion Strengthening Song Devious Dancer OR Subtle Singer Heightened Senses (Sight OR Sound) *Skill Focus (Performer)
3	Songweaver	Dexterity OR Fellowship 4 Dexterity OR Fellowship 3 Performer 3 Devastating Dance (two times) Strengthening Song (two times)	Armor Proficiency (Light) Catfall Defensive Mobility Devastating Dance Strengthening Song *Skill Focus (Performer)
4	Ballroom Master	Dexterity OR Fellowship 5 Dexterity OR Fellowship 4 Performer 4 Devastating Dance (three times) Strengthening Song (three times)	Combat Master Devastating Dance Feather Step Hard Target Strengthening Song Devious Dancer OR Subtle Singer *Skill Focus (Performer)
5	Stage Wizard	Dexterity 5 Fellowship 5 Performer 5 Devastating Dance (four times) Strengthening Song (four times)	Devastating Dance Outstanding Ovation Rhyme and Rhythm Strengthening Song Heightened Senses (Sight OR Sound) *Skill Focus (Performer)

New Feats

Devastating Dance

This feat may be taken multiple times, choosing a different option each time. By taking a full action and making a Performer + Dexterity test against a TN equal to the static defense of your target (which the target can choose to have treated as zero) plus a number depending on the ailment, you can begin dancing and inflict an ailment on an opponent within 25 metres for 1 round. This can be extended with a subsequent Performer + Dexterity test against a TN of 10 plus the same number, taken as a half action each round up to a maximum number of rounds (including the round in which the ailment was inflicted) equal to your level. This effect is magical, but cannot cause Psychic Phenomena.

Darkening Disco	TN +10	The target is Blinded
Dazzling Diablada	TN +10	The target is Dazzled
Flaming Foxtrot	TN +10	The target is set on Fire
Stunning Samba	TN +15	The target is Stunned
Toxic Tango	TN +5	The target is affected at the start of their turn as if you had just damaged them with a weapon with the Toxic quality and they had failed the Constitution test

Devious Dancer

Your static defense increases by 5 while you are using Devastating Dance.

Outstanding Ovation

You may spend raises on the initial Performer tests of Devastating Dance and Strengthening Song to affect additional targets. This increases the TN to maintain the effect by 5 per additional target. You may not choose to "drop" targets to lower the TN to maintain the effect, even if they would no longer be affected by the effect.

Rhyme and Rhythm

While you are using Devastating Dance, initiating Strengthening Song is a half action, and vice versa.

Strengthening Song

This feat may be taken multiple times, choosing a different option each time. By taking a full action and making a Performer + Fellowship test against a TN equal to the static defense of your target (which the target can choose to have treated as zero) plus a number depending on the bonus, you can begin singing and grant a bonus to an ally within 25 metres for 1 round. This can be extended with a subsequent Performer + Fellowship test against a TN of 10 plus the same number, taken as a half action each round up to a maximum number of rounds (including the round in which the bonus was granted) equal to your level. This effect is magical, but cannot cause Psychic Phenomena.

Cogent Canticle	TN +10	The target gets +1k1 on one test of their choice each round they are affected
Defensive Ditty	TN +0	The target gets +2 AP over the whole body which stacks with existing sources of armour
Murderous Melody	TN +10	The target deals +1k1 damage with all attacks
Powerful Poem	TN +5	The target gets a free raise on all tests
Reinforcing Refrain	TN +15	The target gets +1 Resilience

Subtle Singer

You can subvocalise your Strengthening Song to give it the Subtle keyword.

[ScrapyardDragon]

so, I'll still say that powerful poem is incredibly potent. If I may make a suggestion, why not make it only apply the raise if the test was already successful?